falling in love

I still love it and waiting for her to fall for him!!! No crit. Can't wait to read more.

The two people are telling their side of the story. They will come together as the story goes on. It's romance because they fall for each other in the end ...

I would enjoy reading more of this kind of stuff.

Funny, funny, funny. Bush a demon. Even though Clinton messed up with his own personal life, I like him better than any of them. Except for his problem. Bush is ...

Quite funny. He wanted to be the object spoon. Is there going to be more?

I like this piece. Is there going to be more? I want to know how Kara became the popular girl and vis versa. I hope there is more. I would ...

I like it a lot. I like how you add her thoughts in and how she talks to the reader. I think that's really cool. Anyways, the end was funny. ...

I love this chapter better than 8. I can't wait to read more.

I'm loving it. Will they ever be together? They have to be...I can't wait.

*cries* Oh my god. I love it. I was on the edge of my seat in wonder of what was going to happen and then it just ended. I can't ...

The suspense is killing me. I can't wait until you post more. PM me when you have more.

I'm really enjoying this. I can't wait to se how it ends.

This is absolutely killing me cuz it's so much like one of the stories I am writing. Can't wait to read more. No crit.

Absolutely loving it. It looks like something I've written only it isn't. Can't wait to read more!!!

OMG. I absoluely loved it. I will definetly read more. Okay I can't spell. Anywyas, It sounds so much like mine and Kay Kay's writing. That's so awesome. No crit.